Why it is the night that teases me for love
I feel completely abandoned
The silence poisons me
Melody shatters me
Moon, breeze, fragrance exasperate me
And complexities of heart increase
It seems like its in hands of an innocent child
who is holding mud and learning to sculpt
Can I just burn the night, and turn it white
Puffing and drinking doesn’t give me solace
I can’t smoke my mind
and drink my blood
Can I just cut out my heart
and give to ‘the chef’ to roast
He can serve it to them
for whom it matters
At least, I will have a sound sleep
Wouldn’t wait for the day to arrive
Noise to croak lullaby
Much away I will be
from predictable faces I like
and fake voices that I hear
who hail me a hero in return
Can I just burn the night, and turn it white
– Kumar Gautam
I like this one alot. Great perception and weaving of the night
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Thanks 🙂
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I am liking it too
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Thanks Bruce 🙂
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strong write, especially the middle stanza, lots of neat lines in there. Thanks
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Thank you brother…
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Infatuation so profound as the night. I love they way you satirize love here and make the author the hero that he is. Beautiful poem.
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Thank you soo much 🙂
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I loved this poem.
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Thank you edward 🙂
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This was romantic and passionate. Well written I enjoyed reading it. 🙂
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Thank you sooo much
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“It seems like its in hands of an innocent child
who is holding mud and learning to sculpt”
What an amazing simile and an unfortunate feeling several feel when in love. & The second stanza just adds on to the intensity and passion. A well written poem; great job. 🙂
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Thank you sooo much 🙂
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amazing! keep it up!
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hey ceelyn…thank you soo much 🙂
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Lovely poem and the picture is just beautiful. Thank you for sharing!
Peace and love,
Scott 🙂
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Thanks & cheers Scott
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This poem has a beauty of its own! Just like the beauty of the depth of the darkness of the silence of the night! Loved reading this! 🙂
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Thank you dada…
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