Don’t wait for love,
Become love.
Turn fourteen,
Be weird,
Act crazy,
Don’t care,
Remain adamant,
Get conquered.
Let the world mock at you,
Crack jokes on you,
Hurl abuses at you,
Malign you, defame you.
You just be love.
Poems are my first hand emotions. The molten lava within me that overflows with tectonic shift of time, I just scribble and present it before you. Poems are the first tool that taught me to express and that too without any prejudice or bias. I have promised myself to continue with it throughout my life.
@sagedoyle: Thanks 🙂
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Nicely done, be interested to see how you progress though your poetry journey
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Thanks…all willing to learn and progress 🙂
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You have a wide spectrum of work! I especially liked the music video on youtube, KDLP. -Cheers!
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KLPD…you liked it. Thanks 🙂
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I think that you want to say when we face doubts about our love, we should keep our path and shine our love. In poetry, each word is the string that knits an imagination, and not just an word, and I wish to see more of that in your poetry.
Just my opinion =).
kc
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Can understand the point, you wanna make
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Dear Kumar,
A good poem will touch our heart, and the expression we want to make must be clear and simple in words, but with immense depth in its meaning. I feel that you have many ideas you want to express (it is important to elaborate or making them with a impact on our emotion) in this writing in a short poem.
kc
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Check new one “Burn the night”…waiting for your response 🙂
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You know..
I actually do all these things..
Guess that’s why the world mocks me (as u say in your poem)
But what the hell..
be happu with what you are is what I say
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Cheers buddy 🙂
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Very powerful poem and I totally understand the emotion you were trying to emit!! Great job.
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Thanks buddy 🙂
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I like this a lot. It strikes a personal note with me, concerning what I experienced when I was around that age. People may think of this being to get corrupted, but I find it to be an oath to embrace the world, to open your arms and become part of it, evolving from your childish ways
-Garate
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Thanks Garate, I am delighted you liked it 🙂
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nice one and interesting 🙂
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Thank you Deepak
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Wowwww sir.so lovely.heart touching.
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Thank you Shubham, you liked it. Spare time to read others too.
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